The Ocean
BOOM!!
CRASH!!!
BANG!!!!
Thunderous roars.
The waves crash onto the rocks
Slowly eating them away
Every minute
Every second
Crumbling away…
This is one Moff wrote for me:
Billy was silly upon the cliffs at Stenhouse Bay,
The cliffs did crumble,
and Billy had a tumble,
Upon the cliffs at Stenhouse Bay
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Hi Billy,
ReplyDeleteAn excellent effort. Who would have thought that you could convey "erosion" is eloquently. As I said in my letter...you have a great eye for capturing on film what you see...use that to translate it to words instead. Look at it in the same way. You have done that in the poem above. It'd be great to see another poem from you. I know that you have another in you.
Love Dad